The essay will first focus on when and how this shift occurred in American industries. Before planned obsolescence, most manufacturers took pride in designing the best product possible. However, as the market became saturated due to consumer satisfaction, industries were forced to find a new way to maintain profits. The beginning of this essay will examine the automobile industry and its yearly design changes that sparked a need for new products. This among a few other examples formed the foundation of planned obsolescence.
The essay will next explore how this practice developed over time and has now become a staple of American industries. Planned obsolescence takes different forms, as products need replaced when they lose their function or when they go out of style. This deceptive business strategy represents the greed of American industries, as most manufacturers (such as Apple) are not forced to implement this technique to simply stay afloat financially.
Furthermore, this paradigm shift has instilled values of greed and dissatisfaction in American consumers. This trend reflects a cultural shift where product replacement occurs at a blistering pace. Americans are never content with the product they currently have, even if they just purchased it; this draws them back to the market to satisfy their craving.
Lastly, this essay will focus on the direction of planned obsolescence and where it may be heading due to the earth's depleting resources. Links to online resources are listed below.
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ReplyDeleteI have no concerns or critiques at this point. Green light -- keep progressing!